The Competition Portal: Venus Spring
I like the story, its a unique idea!
And I don’t talk fast.
I like the story, its a unique idea!
And I don’t talk fast.
Brave knight broken by the fierce dragons.
My first story for my new NSFW blog! Written for @marsvenusnsfw himself! Content warning include rape, and a slight drugging.
Keith the Knight, now equipped with a sweet short story to go along with the pic!
A birthday gift for @marsvenusnsfw , my apologies if it’s super late! (Partially inspired by a recent art piece of Venus having her food paid for by a kind pony)
It was a typical day for Venus, as in things went wrong almost at any chance they could. Of course, being used to this sort of luck, she didn’t mind. It was to be expected.
As she prepared to go out for coffee and to pick up a few groceries she heard a soft knocking at the door. Quickly she peered through the peephole to see a rather scrappy looking Zebra stallion standing at her door. A little nervous, but not one to turn down company, she unlocked her apartment door and opened it.
“H-hello?” She muttered softly. The zebra smiled and held up a few envelopes with one hoof.
“Sorry to bother a lovely mare like you,” He began in a manor that was almost flirtatious. “but I seem to have gotten a bit of your mail.” Venus took the mail and thanked the kind zeeb.
Just as Venus prepared to shut the door he put his hoof in the way of the door. He opened it with strength that far surpassed her own, grinning down at her.
“I think a little favor is in order for me returning your mail, hmm sweetheart?” He stated in a tone that was dangerously close to being seductive.
“I… umm-” Venus began nervously, averting her gaze from him.
“How about a tall glass of that fresh tea on the counter?” The zebra suddenly exclaimed cheerfully. Venus, a little dumbfounded quickly agreed and hurried to pour his drink. The zebra waited patiently at the door as she prepared him a tall glass with a lemon slice.
He thanked her and downed the drink in just a few gulps, then wiped his mouth and set the glass down. He thanked Venus again and left with a smile.
Now Venus was a bit confused, but pleasantly surprised. Taking it as a sign of good luck for the day, she sat out to enjoy a hot cup of coffee at a local cafe.
The walk was pleasant. Not many ponies were out and about that day and the few that were gave friendly nods as they passed by. The pleasentness of the morning was soon interrupted when Venus arrived at the coffee shop to find the front door boarded up with a sign directing ponies to the side ally entrance, and apologizing for the slight inconvenience.
Poor Venus had had plenty of experience with dark alleyways in the past, and almost none of them were pleasant. She considered just walking away, but something about a fresh cup of hot bean water was far too alluring to her. With a shaky hoof she stepped into the ally and slowly began to make her way to the cafe door.
The ally was rather obscured on either side by the odd architecture of the building neighboring the cafe, which added to her anxieties. Venus noticed a couple of stallions approach her quickly when she was halfway to the door. Before she could turn to flee however, one of them was right in front of her speaking at her in a drunken and slurred manor.
“H-hey preeeeaty little… m-mom…” He paused to gather himself a bit, trying to force a coherent thought. “little momma!” He finally finished. This stallion was green with a piss yellow mane. Venus noted he also smelled very strongly of both alcohol and urine.
The second stallion, who now was standing beside his friend, was red and brown. He smelled of alcohol too, but far less strongly than his pal did.
Venus was now essentially cornered by two rather big ponies. One of them probably too drunk to remember how to be gentle. She gulped as the drunk one stepped closer to her, but his friend pulled him back with a swift yank.
“C-come on man, I want.” The drunk one began before his friend yanked his tail again. “Ow! Ok, okaaay, sorry. You can, you can have the first kiss.” Venus felt her heart about to beat out of her chest with fear. However, after a brief silence, the much more sober stallion sighed and turned to her.
“Sorry ma'am, my boyfriend is piss drunk from an all nighter.” With that the red stallion pulled the green one closer. “Come on sweetie, you need to get to bed.” They began to walk past Venus. “We need to sober up for that zeeb orgy tonight!” That was the last Venus heard from the red pony as the two stallions disappeared around the corner.
Venus blinked a few times trying to process the events that had just transpired. With a small sigh of relief, she entered the busy coffee shop and began to wait in line behind a couple other ponies.
When she finally got to the counter and ordered her drink she realized she had forgotten her purse at home and, by extension, her money. Of course the drink was already made and the mare behind the counter impatiently waited for her cash.
“I’m sorry, I umm, seem to have forgotten my money at home.” Venus said sadly. Just as she finished her sentence a stallion approached the counter beside her. He was tan with a pink mane, and had a cutie mark that was clearly a BDSM collar and whip. He gave Venus a sly grin as he paid for her drink.
“You didn’t have to-” Venus began before being cut off.
“I wanted to, don’t worry about it.” He said. “Just give me a little something back, alright?” He asked. Venus was already mentally preparing herself to be forced into a bathroom stall, and she frowned at the prospect.
“I guess I owe you.” Venus muttered quietly. He put a hoof under her chin and lifted her gaze to meet his.
“How about a nice date later this week? My treat!”
Venus stared at him agape.
“Are you serious?” She asked, to which he nodded and slipped her a piece of paper with a phone number on it.
“I’ll let you think on it, alright? Call me.” He quickly shuffled off about his day leaving Venus even more shocked than the rest of the morning had.
The rest of her day went by in a rather similar manor. At one point she even found herself in a rather vulnerable position when her rather wide flanks prevented her from squeezing through a gap in a fence she was hoping to use as a shortcut to home. Even with her crotch entirely exposed to anypony who cared to look, she only caught the attention of a single mare who helped her squeeze past the gap by pushing against her.
Finally, Venus reached her apartment. Since she was holding a bag of groceries in her magic grasp she decided to take the elevator up to her floor even though it always had the strange stench of stale piss. She stepped into the elevator where the only other pony was a stallion with a sly grin on his face stood. It wasn’t until after the doors to the elevator had closed that she noticed the rather thick and erect stallionhood hanging under his belly.
Venus quickly looked away with a light blush on her face. The Stallion gave a small chuckle.
“Like what you see, sweet cheeks?” He asked while brushing his dark blue mane away from his amber eyes. Venus blushed a bit darker and continued to face the other way.
“I’m heading up to surprise my marefriend for her birthday. She’s a sexy little zebra, knoe what I’m saying? Hell yeah, you do!” Venus gave him a nervous smile and gulped a bit.
The elevator stopped and opened, and Venus peered down the hallway to her door.
“This is my stop, b-bye I guess.” Venus stuttered while stepping out of the shaft.
“Yeah, you have a damn good night little lady!” The stallion exclaimed with a big flashy smile. “I sure as hell know I will!”
The metal doors slid closed and he was gone, leaving Venus in the calming solitude of an empty corridor. She approached her apartment and started looking for her keys. She shuffled about wildly looming through everything she had with her but came up short. With a defeated sigh she let her head fall against the door which then slowly opened. Venus looked inside her home realizing she had locked the door and forgotten to latch it properly. Despite how dumb she felt, she was glad to finally get a break.
Honestly, after such a rough day Venus was glad to throw herself down in bed and slowly drift off to sleep. Oddly enough, she felt a sense of peace in the stillness if her bedroom that night that soothed her dreams of hot rape all throughout the night.
I FEEL TROLLED
Nice gift though, thank you!
Is now on FimFiction
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403916/dragon-tales-and-venus-rails
As well as Keith being a cheerleader toy.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403913/the-trotters-newest-member
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12623919/1/Pearl-and-Silver-Treasure
Its not really my thing, but not bad! Thank you for writing it!
Keith stumbles into the men’s locker room, exhausted, dirty, and sore all over the place. He thinks of himself as a fool for trying out for his high school’s hoofball team. He wanted to be a running back so badly, but alas, he got killed by every single defender on the team. He should probably just stick to cheer leading.
This wouldn’t be easy however, considering how the secret has gotten out that he’s really a stallion, not a mare. He regrets everything that day, and all because he landed that flip, and those stallions caught him in the bathroom, he knew it was game over.
Now he was trying to prove himself as a stallion, but it’s quite obvious he’s meant to be a mare.Keith drops his bags and heads straight to the showers. The showers are only connected by a door way, and he door as been taken off the hinges. It suits well for some privacy.
As Keith starts washing himself, he hears the door opens the hoofs of three stallions walk in. He slowly moves over to the door and peaks over, and sees that the stallions that have walked in are the star players on the field; the quarter back, who’s the average height and size, a defensive player, who’s big, strong, and very mean looking, and the running back, a small stallion, but is very fast.
Keith hides behind shower wall, spying on them as they undress. He starts smelling their musk, and it’s one of the greatest things he’s ever smelled before in his life. He loves it, so much that he can get intoxicated by just a whiff of it.
He starts getting hard, and before he knows it, he starts stroking himself. His cock is puny to the massively hung stallions in front of him, but he doesn’t care. He just fantasizes about having there cocks in him all at once. He lets out a few moans as he jerks himself.“Hey, did you hear that?” The Quarter Back asks, lifting an eye brow.
The running back nods and points towards the shower.
“Ah think it’d come from in there.” Says the running back. The Defensive player walks into the shower and sees Keith jerking slowly.
“We have spy with us!” He says. His literation that of a 3 year old.
Keith jumps and yelps. “I’m sorry!” He says. The defensive player takes him by the neck and carries him out onto the locker room, dropping him in the middle of the 3 stallions.
The Quarter back crouches down. “Well well well, what do we have here?” He asks smirking a little bit. “You should know better to spy on us~” Keith gulps a little bit.
“I-i’m sorry! I’ll just be going no-” He feels something hard being placed on his mane, the object thrusting back and forth, messing the poor sissy stallions mane up. It’s the throbbing cock of the defensive player. The Quarter back only smiles.
“We won’t let something like this go away~” he cooes out before the running back ties Keith’s front hooves together.Keith squirms, but stops shortly after the stallions all stand on the hind legs, their cocks now completely erect and pointing towards the sissy stallions face. “Y'all wait, I’m up!” Exclaims the Quarter Back as he shoves the head of his cock in Keith’s mouth. Keith lets out a muffled moan as he tries to escape.
The defensive player starts spanking him with a belt. “No move!” He yells right before the running back forces Keith to engulf his entire cock.
Keith rolls his eyes back, choking on the Running back’s cock. He’s soon released only to have the Defensive players cock stuck deep down his throat.
“Mmmmm…must be tight end.” Says the defensive player.
Keith lets out more muffled screams before he’s released again, the Quarter Back now having his turn with him.
“Come on, suck!” Says the Quarter Back. Keith obliges, sucking as hard as he can, now getting into this.
This goes on for the next few minutes, Kieth being switched from cock to cock, sucking as best he can. It comes as a shock once they all are out of him, and starts cumming all over his face. “This is only the warm up!” Says the Quarter back.Keith nods and pants softly, looking up at them all. “P-please…” He says, his cum hungry face showing exactly what he wants.
They don’t waist any time, the defensive player lies on his back and picks Keith up, lowering him slowly in his shaft. He starts using him as if he’s his own cock sleeve! In just a few moments, the defensive player buries his entire cock in Keith’s hole, causing the stallion to let out a long, lustful moan. The running back sees this as his opportunity and shoves the entirety of his cock down the Sissy Stallion"s throat.
Both of the stallions lets out loud grunt of pleasure as they thrust slowly, but bring hard hits, making Keith’s mind go crazy. The defensive player’s cock is so far deep in him, the entire length rubbing up against his sweet spot, which makes Keith’s cock throb and ooze out pre. He starts swallowing the salty pre from the Running back’s cock, and its absolutely amazing to him. He turns into their cum slut, sucking on the Running back’s cock and bouncing up and down on the defensive’s massive length. He begs for their cum, and he finally gets his wish.
The defensive player lets out a loud moan of pleasure as cum spurts out of his cock and onto the Sissy stallion’s hole. He must’ve came a gallon, for his belly begins go bulge just slightly from the amount. The running back isn’t too far behind, letting put a sigh of relief before he shoots a decent load down Keith’s throat, which Keith happily swallows up, not daring to let a single drop spill. They both pull out, both of their bulges making a shluck sound as they do. This leaves Keith panting heavily, knowing he has one more stallion to please.The Quart Back picks up Keith and presses his back against the wall, his cock now pressing against the sissy stallion’s hole. “You’ll thank me for this.” He says before shoving his entire cock down Keith’s hole.
Keith screams out in pleasure as the cock is buried in him, begging for the Quarter back to go faster, his words coming out as jumbled up messes.
The Quart back smiles as he starts thrusting deep into Keith, using a hoof to now jerk Keith hard. This sends Keith over the edge, his cock spraying out his cum all over himself. “Yyyeeesssss!!!!~~~” he moans out, his legs shivering to the extreme amounts of pleasure he’s receiving.
The Quarter back starts grunting, his thrusts becoming harder and faster, and before he knows his, he starts shooting a nice load of his his seed in Keith, quickly pulling out so he can cum all over his face.The Quarter back lies Keith, who’s barely conscious now, on the ground and gives him one last spank. “I hoped you learned your lesson~” he says as the 3 stallions walk out, leaving the stallion twitching and covered on cum on the floor, waiting for the next stallions to use him.
Epilogue
“Will Keith report to the principal’s office!” Roars the intercom, and a few minutes later, Keith is sitting in front of the principal.
“Do you know why you’re here?” The principal asks sternly.
“N-no sir…I don’t…” Replies Keith.
The principal growls and turns on a TV next to him, which plays back everything that has just happened in the locker room. “I don’t accept this kind of behavior in my school!” Yells the principal. “Now… I would expel you….but….” Two teaches walk in, both if their cocks dangling between their legs. “…I won’t if you do me a favor…”
Keith blushes heavily and gulps a bit and nods, a smile creeping onto his face. “Y-yes sir.” He says, preparing himself to serve three more stallions.
Hawt little fanfic of Keith! Thank you for writing this for me!
I want another fanfic of Venus taking it in the mouth and ass. That’s all I want ^^ Well, that, and a very hot concept for why it’s happening. If you’re interested, I’ll be trading a sketch with a background for said story ^^
Also, I’m up for art trades with people as well. I’d really like to see someone else drawing Venus sucking cock.
This is written by ebonmane and it’s pretty darn hot ;D
Here’s his Tumblr: http://ebonmane.tumblr.com/
And Fimfiction:http://www.fimfiction.net/user/ebonmane
“Venus, we know you plagiarized. Don’t even try to deny it,” Principal Hardnose looked
down his glasses at the young student. Under his hands on his tidy desk were the paper the young
mare had turned in yesterday, and its copy.
She gulped. Speaking was difficult enough with her mouth full of braces. Her palms were
sweating, and the lump in her throat wouldn’t seem to go away. She managed to croak out a
sentence. “What’s gonna happen to me?”
The old, graying stallion folded his hands and leaned back in his chair. “You have two
choices. You could be expelled.”
Venus gulped again. “What’s the second?”
Principal Hardnose just grinned at her.